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What Makes a Winning Pitch Deck?

  • Writer: Avy-Loren Cohen
    Avy-Loren Cohen
  • Feb 21
  • 5 min read
Story Telling - read on to learn how.


Working with numerous accelerators, incubators, family offices, and venture capital organizations has enabled me to gather mountains of data about what prospective investor's “likes and dislikes” are. I have been a judge on hundreds of pitch events over the years and am always surprised when a pitch is happening and the initial presenter does not explain the background story, the journey, the “why and how” the idea came to create their company this introducing the problem and solution in a seamless manner that is both relatable, memorable, and understandable to the audience. It is for this reason that I have decided to write this article to provide founders with this incredibly valuable pitch strategy — (almost) always (depending on time and audience) start with your story…


Crafting a Compelling Narrative Key Dos and Don’ts


The Dos


Crafting a compelling narrative for your pitch presentation to prospective investors is crucial in capturing their attention and making a lasting impression. Start by establishing a personal connection through a relatable anecdote that led to the inception of your startup. Clearly outline the problem your startup addresses and the unique solution it offers, emphasizing the significance of your product or service. Take investors through your journey and the evolution of your startup, highlighting key milestones, achievements, and learnings that showcase your growth and progress. Emphasize and communicate your passion for driving your startup and the mission behind it to convey your commitment to making a difference that will translate into being a long-term bankable investment. Introduce your innovative solution in alignment with the identified problem, providing social proof through testimonials or success stories. End your narrative with a memorable hook to leave investors with a lasting impact. Avoid using industry jargon, oversharing unnecessary details, or relying on generic statements. Utilize visuals strategically to enhance your storytelling and maintain a concise, focused presentation that communicates the value of your startup effectively. By following these guidelines, you can craft a compelling narrative that engages investors and sets the stage for a successful pitch.


The Don’ts


When crafting your pitch presentation for potential investors, it is crucial to steer clear of certain pitfalls that can detract from the effectiveness of your storytelling. For instance, refrain from using excessive industry jargon that may alienate your audience. Instead of saying, “Our startup leverages blockchain technology for seamless integration,” opt for a simpler explanation like, “Our platform makes transactions faster and more secure.”

Additionally, avoid delving into unnecessary technical details that could overwhelm your listeners. Rather than diving deep into the intricacies of your algorithm, focus on the outcomes it delivers. Generic statements like “We have the best product in the market” lack impact; instead, provide specific examples of how your product outperforms competitors. Be wary of going off on tangents that divert attention from your core message. For instance, if discussing your market strategy, ensure each point aligns with the narrative you’re crafting. Lastly, while visuals can enhance your presentation, relying too heavily on them can detract from your storytelling. Strike a balance by using visuals to complement your narrative rather than overshadowing it. By sidestepping these common missteps, you can create a pitch presentation that captivates investors and effectively conveys the value of your startup.


Communication Style

Another point you must always adhere to as much and whenever possible is do not exaggerate, do not lie, and if you are ignorant of an answer be honest and upfront — perhaps let the individual know you will make a mental note of the question and get back to him with an answer as soon as possible.


In addition to the aforementioned points, it is crucial to avoid making promises or projections that are unrealistic or unsubstantiated. Investors value honesty and transparency, so ensure that any claims you make in your pitch presentation are backed up by data, research, or tangible evidence. Moreover, steer clear of presenting a disorganized or cluttered narrative that lacks a clear structure. Your story should flow logically from one point to the next, guiding the audience through a compelling journey that highlights the unique value proposition of your startup. Furthermore, avoid neglecting the emotional aspect of storytelling. While facts and figures are essential, weaving in emotional elements can help create a connection with your audience and make your pitch more memorable. By incorporating these additional points into your pitch presentation, you can enhance the impact of your narrative and increase your chances of impressing potential investors.


Engaging prospective investors on emotional, intellectual, and financial dimensions is a fundamental aspect of securing funding for your startup. When investors can establish a strong connection with your business model, products, the problem your startup aims to solve, and the innovative solutions it offers, they are more inclined to explore further opportunities with your venture. Beyond showcasing your passion as a founder, it is equally important to discern signs that investors truly resonate with your startup’s mission. A key indicator of genuine interest is when investors begin to express their enthusiasm, a behavior often concealed behind a veneer of calm professionalism akin to a savvy car buyer negotiating with a salesperson. While investors may be interested in investing, their objective, like any astute startup backer, is to secure the best deal possible. Hence, it is imperative to remain vigilant for any subtle cues, such as poker faces, that may reveal their underlying sentiments. Moreover, strategically withholding compelling details for post-presentation discussions or during the Q&A session can infuse an element of intrigue and maintain investor engagement throughout the interaction. By leveraging these nuanced strategies, founders can navigate the intricate dynamics of investor relations with finesse and increase the likelihood of securing valuable partnerships and potential investors.



 

Hello, I am Avy-Loren, specializing in strategic business consulting and Executive Advisory services catering to companies worldwide across diverse industries. My expertise lies in collaborating with startups, founders, and public company CEOs, guiding them toward achieving their personal and professional aspirations with a sense of respect and pride. Throughout the past decade, I have actively co-founded three companies and currently serve as a co-founder and COO/CSO of a tech venture. Additionally, I have made investments in early-stage startups as an Angel investor, acted as a consultant and advisor for a prominent US-based VC firm, and mentored countless individuals and startups. I also encourage you to follow me on Medium and share this article with anyone you believe would benefit from its valuable insights. Together, we can overcome obstacles and drive success in the ever-evolving business landscape.


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